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Weird but true - automation s_cksssss
Been testing out a LOT in my business and client businesses. AI is the current marketing gospel. Doing things manually is medieval. Can't be doing anything yourself, it's unbecoming. AI takes care of marketing and copy and making dinner reservations and making coffee. You just show up and look at robots working. Except. That doesn't happen. Does it? I still make my own copy. And dinner reservations. And whenever I ask AI to write something it sounds like a robot wrote i

Jim Towe
Oct 171 min read


Get More Sales By Improving Your Writing (part 3 - Stop Waffling Around)
You know what really kills sales? Being boooooooooooring. And the most boring thing in the world is something called “waffling”. You might not know the term but once I show you some examples you’ll start seeing it everywhere. How To Recognise And Ruthlessly Kill Your Waffling Take a look at this sentence: “The meeting will be held at five and what will be discussed is ‘the sorry state of business writing.” Or this one: “I’m reaching out to you because we've been in t

Jim Towe
Oct 162 min read


Get More Sales By Improving Your Writing (part 2 - The Undefeated BAR test)
In the last article we made sure that your content doesn’t scare off your ideal prospect. If you Alright, now your content looks the part. It’s time we make it actually easy to breeze through for a reader. Once we’ve lured them in it’s our job to keep them reading whatever we wrote. So how do we do that? The same way you’d do it in a bar. Use The BAR Test To Fix Your Writing “As a business owner your job is to solve problems. Someone having electrical issues? It’s a goo

Jim Towe
Oct 153 min read
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